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    Agent Magnus Frazier "Shamrock"

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    Join date : 2015-10-02
    Age : 31
    Location : Georgia

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    Post by Nimbus Fri 02 Oct 2015, 13:58

    Name: Magnus Frazier "Shamrock"
    Clearance Level: Level 3
    Occupation: Specialized Field Medic
    Job Description: Tags along with special task forces and fixes any medical anomalies that might arise.
    On-site medic when needed.
    Weapon(s): "8 Standard Serrated Military Knife with a stylized Caduceus etched into the blade, Colt M4A4

    Physical Characteristics
    Age: 29
    Sex: Male
    Height: 5"11
    Body Build: Thick
    Eyes: Brown
    Hair: Short Well-Kempt Dark Brown Hair, 5-o'clock Shadow

    Bio: Magnus was raised in [EXPUNGED], Wisconsin on a small farm in the countryside.
    He had an affinity for the way living things worked, how everything had its own heartbeat and drew its own breath,
    frequently dissecting dead livestock to further understand how creatures functioned.
    His father tokened the nickname Shamrock for Magnus, crediting luck with
    his natural medical deftness and his almost uncanny ability to self-teach and retain medical knowledge.
    Both of his parents died by the time he was 20, his father from alcoholism and his mother from Leukemia.
    He packed his few belongings and moved to join the military, seeking to support ground troops as a field medic.
    Magnus gained the attention instructors alike, demonstrating greatvalor and prowess under stress, using his limited supplies to treat virtually any wound that arose on the field.
    After years of hard drilling, medical care programs and experience, Agent [EXPUNGED] approached Magnus and handed him an envelope.
    The letter was ominous, detailing an undercover organization that took note of his achievements and wished to
    enlist his talents for their own use and employment. He was told to gather his belongings and tie up unfinished business,
    and he did as he was told. He was taken to an aircraft in [EXPUNGED], arriving at site 1-[EXPUNGED]. He was briefed by
    on-site officials in SCP staff conduct and was assigned his role as a specialist field medic, being ordered to follow task forces
    and quickly fix field injuries and provide pain-nullifying injections, as well as the usage of body manipulation to keep agents going.
    Magnus prefers to go by the alias "Shamrock" and will become agitated if his wishes aren't respected. Shamrock comes off as intimidating
    at first, but he's rather quiet and receptive, only speaking out if he is defending someone or something he is fond of. Rarely resorts
    to physical violence and adapted a fighting style from military taught hand-to-hand methods and traditional boxing; hates violence and is rather
    slow and inattentive to things outside of medical care, animals, and a music player he utilizes in stressful situations presumably to stay his nerves
    and focus his thoughts; tracks on record undisclosed.


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    Post by Guest Fri 02 Oct 2015, 14:48

    (Hi there ,I'm glad you wanna rp and have taken the time to make an agent file. There are just some things that you may want to look over. 

    1. The bio : There are some odd things about it ;  dissecting part is kinda weird for someone to do in their free time, and you didn't explain how he got taught medical stuff in the farm.

    2.Lack of detail in the profile : Where did he study?, Since he is a field medic what kind of weapon does he use? ,  What is he like?  Just some more sprinkles to the ice-cream.
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    Post by Dr. Aoki Fri 02 Oct 2015, 17:29

    (I think it's fine for the most part, Aimus. My only discrepency is that you either need a professional medical background or to take a 16 month EMT course in the army. Natural adeptitude might cut that down to 8 or 10 months, but I think another year to the age would be warranted. Not a mod, just a suggestion. Otherwise great though!)
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    Post by Guest Sat 10 Oct 2015, 17:36

    That's much better! You got the Aimus seal of approval.
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    Post by Guest Sat 10 Oct 2015, 17:36

    sorry for the long wait

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