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    Post by Dr.Oakman Thu 23 Jan 2014, 17:38

    Full Name: Dr.J███ Oakman
    Clearance Level: 3
    Occupation: Scientist
    Job Description: To test and document Safe and Euclid level SCP
    Specialty: Machine based SCP

    Physical characteristics
    Age: 30
    Gender: Male
    Skin tone: Pale
    Height 170 cm (5'6)
    Body Build: Slim with broad shoulders
    Eyes: Brown
    Hair: Black and unkempt (note: a few gray hairs from stress)
    
Distinguishing features: Barcode tattoo on right wrist and slight gap in between teeth

    Bio: Dr.Oakman was born in █████████, USA on ███████ ██, 1983, from a young age he gained an interest in technology, always taking apart VCRs and shocking himself on outlets, after skipping 4 grades he came the foundation's attention recruited after gaining a doctorate from █████████ ██████ University, with an incredible ambition and high intellect he quickly rose through the ranks much to the dismay of his co-workers, he often is the first to volunteer for tests and paperwork, usually for mechanical, he has a particular interest for SCP like: SCP-914 and SCP-212, often looking at test results and situations from different angles than others.

    Other information:

    • Dr.Oakman requests an annual randomized IQ test so far the results have all been increasingly gifted.


    Note: Dr.Oakman has been known to occasionally suffer from mood swings, please leave him alone when this occurs. -Dr.███████

    Interview log between Dr.Oakman in Dr.S█████ about SCP-914:
    Dr.S█████:
    "I just wanted to know how you felt about 914."
    Dr.Oakman:
    "It's so intriguing, even though..."
    Dr.S█████:
    "Even though what?"
    Dr.Oakman:
    "You know that doing tests on 914 are pointless right...we should still do them, but they're pointless."
    Dr.S█████:
    "How so?"
    Dr.Oakman:
    "(Because) it seems as far as I can tell, the results are completely randomized, yeah they have some pattern, but it's not like you're going to get the same result twice, it's just making it up as it goes along."
    Dr.S█████:
    "..."
    Dr.Oakman:
    "But again, we shouldn't stop doing them, I still really enjoy them, the device; 914 is so fascinating, the cogs, the gears, all the machinery, how it might even be sapient!"
    Dr.Oakman:
    "I would love to get in there and see, learn, feel how that thing ticks."
    Dr.S█████:
    "...that will be all Dr.Oakman."
    [INTERVIEW ENDS]



    Note: "his 'interest' in SCP-914 has become more like an obsession." -Dr.S█████


    Last edited by Dr.Oakman on Sun 26 Jan 2014, 15:36; edited 8 times in total (Reason for editing : trying to change SCP to SCPs)
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    Post by Dr.Oakman Thu 23 Jan 2014, 17:46

    I tried really hard, any constructive criticism?    Very Happy
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    Post by D.O.S. Thu 23 Jan 2014, 18:41

    Are you a boy, or a girl?
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    Post by David Alexander Thu 23 Jan 2014, 19:08

    Clearance level is too high, a typical L4 would be in his late 40s, minimum. A bit vague with character design, and the bio needs a LARGE overhaul. More details and proper classification methods, month and day are usually classified, year can be kept.
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    Post by Mozy Fri 24 Jan 2014, 14:41

    David when did the age change, I must have been grand fathered in but anyway, I think you should start at a lower clearance level.
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    Post by Dr.Oakman Fri 24 Jan 2014, 15:08

    David Alexander wrote:Clearance level is too high, a typical L4 would be in his late 40s, minimum. A bit vague with character design, and the bio needs a LARGE overhaul. More details and proper classification methods, month and day are usually classified, year can be kept.


    What do you mean exactly, about "More details and proper classification methods" and what should I change about the bio?
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    Post by Dr.Oakman Fri 24 Jan 2014, 15:14

    D.O.S. wrote:Are you a boy, or a girl?



    "Gender: Male"
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    Post by Mozy Fri 24 Jan 2014, 16:28

    It is getting there, the bio could use at least one more sentence.
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    Post by D.O.S. Fri 24 Jan 2014, 17:07

    I can't believe you don't understand the joke, considering you made the guy's name.
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    Post by Dr.Oakman Fri 24 Jan 2014, 18:21

    scratch I'm sorry I don't understand.
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    Post by Dr.Oakman Fri 24 Jan 2014, 18:59

    how about now?
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    Post by Dr.Oakman Sat 25 Jan 2014, 22:55

    OOC: It says I'm registered does that mean this was approved or what because I don't know how this works.
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    Post by Mozy Sun 26 Jan 2014, 08:55

    OK you just keep upping the IQ why?
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    Post by The "Oblivion" Sun 26 Jan 2014, 09:09

    Not only do you keep increasing your IQ, but you're also not specific about the kind of IQ...
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    Post by Dr.Oakman Sun 26 Jan 2014, 09:21

    The \"Oblivion" wrote:Not only do you keep increasing your IQ, but you're also not specific about the kind of IQ...

    What do you mean type of IQ?
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    Post by The "Oblivion" Sun 26 Jan 2014, 11:48

    Dr.Oakman wrote:
    The \"Oblivion" wrote:Not only do you keep increasing your IQ, but you're also not specific about the kind of IQ...

    What do you mean type of IQ?
    An individual's IQ scores will differ between different tests and scales. I included my IQ on my file, but it wasn't numbered. Instead it was categorized to make it more standardized.
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    Post by Dr.Oakman Sun 26 Jan 2014, 12:15

    could you link me your file so I can see what your looking for?
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    Post by Mozy Sun 26 Jan 2014, 12:19

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    Post by Mozy Sun 26 Jan 2014, 12:20

    that is the file
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    Post by Dr.Oakman Sun 26 Jan 2014, 12:28

    it doesn't have any thing on IQ in there, I'm confused.
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    Post by O.W. Sun 26 Jan 2014, 12:34

    quit changing your font. please. it's becoming very annoying. we have this default one for a reason.
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    Post by Dr.Oakman Sun 26 Jan 2014, 12:35

    sorry... Sad 
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    Post by The "Oblivion" Sun 26 Jan 2014, 12:42

    Mozy wrote:HERE
    It's in the filing cabinet not this one...
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    Post by Mozy Sun 26 Jan 2014, 12:45

    Oh sorry I just found your file and linked it, just link what category your IQ is.
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